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 Left4DeadYezz's Overwatch transhuman arm application. [DENIED]

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Left4DeadYezz
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Join date : 2014-12-13

PostSubject: Left4DeadYezz's Overwatch transhuman arm application. [DENIED]   Sat Dec 13, 2014 12:28 pm

Steam name:
Steam ID:
What motivates you to join the OTA?
Ota roleplay for me is very fun, and i'd like to help improve the community by making it more
interesting.
How long have you been a part of the community?
Around a day.
How long have you been playing HL2RP?
A year.
Have you ever been banned before?
Yes, once.
Have you ever had experience within staff or owned a serious RP server?
Yes. I've been an SA, Admin, and Operator.


Do you have any past experience with the OTA whitelist?
Oh...yes. I have. Overwatch is by far my main whitelist.

Give a detailed roleplay situation example showing how you would use your character:
UU-OTA-ECHO-OWS.12122 walks out of the nexus for a slums sweep
UU-OTA-ECHO-OWS.12122 radios in: ''<::SLUMS SWEEP:10-20 D(slums district)::>
UU-OTA-ECHO-OWS.12122 meets up with the other overwatch units, getting in formation along with the rest of his strike team.
UU-OTA-KING-EOW.12344 says: ''<::EXECUTE:FOLLOW KING::>
UU-OTA-KING-EOW.12344  begins to move
UU-OTA-NOVA-OWS.19999 follows
UU-OTA-ECHO-OWS.12122 does the same





Explain why it’s very important that you behave appropriately in the role as a OTA:
If you don't it will ruin the Roleplay experince for everyone around you, and give the server a bad reputation.

Why is it important that you get recruited over all the other applicants?
I feel I would make a good addition to OTA, as I have been roleplaying as one for a year now.
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PostSubject: Re: Left4DeadYezz's Overwatch transhuman arm application. [DENIED]   Sat Dec 13, 2014 1:04 pm

The entire application is lacking a massive amount of effort, and if this is your best, I am afraid you will have to improve greatly on every aspect.
The roleplaying example is anything but detailed, and has nothing but simple actions, and every single /me is nearly as short as they can possibly get. The effort put into it is minimal, and it not following the instructions properly.

And roleplaying as an OTA for a year doesn't automatically mean that you have the correct experience, or is that great at roleplaying. As your RP example shows, you don't really seem to be the best at either. And if you've been roleplaying only a year, with OTA being your 'main whitelist', as you mentioned, I fear that you lack roleplaying experience in every other faction of the HL2RP universe (Citizen, MPF, CWU, etc), and that this highly limits your roleplay to be OTA based. This means that your other characters may lack overall personality, and will probably more or less be the same as an OTA in a different outfit, and with the lack of their abilities (strength) and weaponry.

So I suggest that you try roleplaying as these for a longer duration of time, and build up your overall roleplaying experience, as well as become better at creating detailed roleplay. By this, I once again refer to your roleplay example. When you have done that, I hope that you have greatly improved your roleplay capabilities, and will make a new OTA application that will truly shock all that reads it, and receive massive support.
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PostSubject: Re: Left4DeadYezz's Overwatch transhuman arm application. [DENIED]   Sat Dec 13, 2014 1:29 pm

Left4DeadYezz wrote:
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I mean this just illustrates the point that Niko made.

Also 10-20 is location, which I assume you know so saying "Slums Sweep: 10-20 (etc etc)" is pointless as Bio Signals are traced and also HC would know where and OTA would be, since they can't come out of Stasis without authorisation.

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PostSubject: Re: Left4DeadYezz's Overwatch transhuman arm application. [DENIED]   Sat Dec 13, 2014 10:19 pm

Needs more effort, more detail, and the questions need to be filled in.......... Please fix this and I will re-vote. As for now, -Support
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